The Visit

image of shepherd with lamb visiting the baby Jesus Christ for story The Visit by author JeniseCook.com

Angels filled the night sky with song. A light, brighter than hundreds of campfires, illumined our fields. Trembling with anticipation, I entered the stable, my lamb in my arms, and knelt before the manger. My lamb nuzzled the infant. His weary mother touched my cheek.

Tears blurred my vision.

“Immanuel.”


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Republished: 4 December 2021, Agape Review

First Published: 20 December 2019, The Friday Fix on Medium.com
(I left the platform and removed my works.)

Image Credit: lavaligiainviaggio on Pixabay.com


The Story Behind this Story

The story prompt for the 2oth was “the best gift”. What did I write about?

For me, the best gift is Immanuel (Hebrew), God with us. This story is from a shepherd’s point of view.


Your Turn

What was, or is, the best gift to you? Let me know in the Comments.

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